Autobiography Feedback

I had the chance this weekend to review the submitted autobiographies that student's were working hard at the last few weeks. They were very interesting and most were very well done. Students and parents are encouraged to review feedback on the Google Drive.

Some areas of improvement:

- including a variety of word choice

- including a introduction and conclusion sentence for each paragraph

- and using transitions (Also, However, Since, Additionally, etc)

Just a reminder for those that have not submitted their autobiographies in the language folder on the Google Drive. Please do so ASAP and let me know so I can assess and give you feedback.